Hi Logan, I'm Miro from Paroa School in Greymouth I like how you wrote when the moon landing happened, but you could have added more information in. Like why they did it and who did it. Thank you, Miro
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Hi Logan, I'm Miro from Paroa School in Greymouth
ReplyDeleteI like how you wrote when the moon landing happened, but you could have added more information in. Like why they did it and who did it.
Thank you, Miro
This is not boring it is really interesting. I like it
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