Hello hello, right under this is stuff about my pet. Whoo hoo!
My pet is a dog.
She is a girl.
Her name is Luna but sometimes we call her LunaBean and we say “Where ya been LunaBean?”
Luna is about nine months old.
Her breed is a Golden Retriever but she doesn't retrieve gold sadly.
Her colour is gold of course because she is a Golden Retriever.
She likes meeting new people and she likes going on walks because she is a dog.
Luna --->
Hi Logan its Liam. Maybe make the size bigger because i cant see it. So yeas
ReplyDeleteHello Liam but if I make any bigger I think it would be to big.
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ReplyDeleteHello Logan! I really like how you added some funny bits in there. I have always wanted a golden retriever, maybe next time dont press enter after a sentence but it was very good!
Ki ora logan your dog is really cute i wich she was mine but she is it so maby put a little bit more information about her. from aimee
ReplyDeleteKa ora logan,
ReplyDeleteHi it’s Jessica and I really like the description of Luna. Luna kind of reminds me of the movie a dog's purpose. You could add a little more information like what she likes or her favorite food or something like that.
From Jessica